The commentary track is my chance to analyze the comic panel by panel and discuss anything that comes to mind as I read it with some distance between that cold February day I spent making it and now. I'll talk rendering style, acknowledge drawing problems and seek to find the root of my writing decisions - how this story reveals more about the feelings I carry with me from my adolescent days than I'd really like to believe.

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Only the first 3 pages have commentary so far.

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